Edit/Approval - Merrell Capra Bolt - K Waters

"[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> 09 Jan 2017 10:10:10 -0800
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Here you go Kathy. Edits below in the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/husuz93
  
 Cheers, Richard
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 ### TESTER INFORMATION ###
 Edit: While not required, it would be helpful to add your shoe size (US/European)
  
 ###  Listed Weight: 1 lb 8 oz (0.68 kg)
 Measured Weight: 1 lb 10 oz (0.74 kg) ###
 EDIT: Indicate if per shoe or per pair.
  
 ### Photo Copywrite Merrell ###
 EDIT: copyright [spelling]
  
 ### Location and condition details for the most recent forays are as follows:###
 Edit: Adding trail conditions – forest duff, hardpacked road, scree, loose rock, etc – would aid this Review considerably. This was almost an EDIT.
  
 ### Vegetation is scrubby Pinon Pine, Gamble Oak, Juniper, cactus and prairie grasses ###
 Edit:Three in the series have initial caps, two don't. This would read better if only the word "Gamble" was capitalized.
  
 ### This was way back in February, 2016 ###
 Edit: Comma is unnecessary
  
 ###I never used these boots for a long-backpack, ###
 Edit: I'd delete the hyphen.
  
 ### I didn't have any problems with sore aches or overly feeling sharp protruding rocks on the trail. ###
 Edit: I'm confused. "sores, aches, or rocks" or "aches and rocks?" "sore aches" is redundant. If the former, two changes [add a comma or two and make "sores" plural; if the latter I'd delete "sore."
  
 ### Fortunately, the boots always dried out overnight and shockingly, don't smell offensively.###
 EDIT:  Past and present tense verbs in the same sentence. Change one verb or the other.
  
 ### the Capra Bolt shoes have maintain their good looks and structual integrity! ### 
 EDIT: maintained
 
 EDIT: structural