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Here you go Kathy. Edits below in the standard EDIT/Edit/Comment format. After revising upload to http://tinyurl.com/husuz93
Cheers, Richard
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### TESTER INFORMATION ###
Edit: While not required, it would be helpful to add your shoe size (US/European)
### Listed Weight: 1 lb 8 oz (0.68 kg)
Measured Weight: 1 lb 10 oz (0.74 kg) ###
EDIT: Indicate if per shoe or per pair.
### Photo Copywrite Merrell ###
EDIT: copyright [spelling]
### Location and condition details for the most recent forays are as follows:###
Edit: Adding trail conditions – forest duff, hardpacked road, scree, loose rock, etc – would aid this Review considerably. This was almost an EDIT.
### Vegetation is scrubby Pinon Pine, Gamble Oak, Juniper, cactus and prairie grasses ###
Edit:Three in the series have initial caps, two don't. This would read better if only the word "Gamble" was capitalized.
### This was way back in February, 2016 ###
Edit: Comma is unnecessary
###I never used these boots for a long-backpack, ###
Edit: I'd delete the hyphen.
### I didn't have any problems with sore aches or overly feeling sharp protruding rocks on the trail. ###
Edit: I'm confused. "sores, aches, or rocks" or "aches and rocks?" "sore aches" is redundant. If the former, two changes [add a comma or two and make "sores" plural; if the latter I'd delete "sore."
### Fortunately, the boots always dried out overnight and shockingly, don't smell offensively.###
EDIT: Past and present tense verbs in the same sentence. Change one verb or the other.
### the Capra Bolt shoes have maintain their good looks and structual integrity! ###
EDIT: maintained
EDIT: structural