Re: Edit - MontBell EX Light Down Jacket - Justin Jackson

"jmjackson080-/[email protected] [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> Sun, 22 Jan 2017 16:57:18 +0000 (UTC)
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Hey Richard,


Thank you for the feedback!  I think I can get that done toda=
y or tomorrow.  Ill check out some ORs on the site to get a better idea for=
 acceptable format/content.  I just wanted to respond so you knew I got the=
 email.  


Justin 


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On Fri, 1/=
20/17, [email protected] [BackpackGearTest] <BackpackGearTest@yahoog=
roups.com> wrote:


 Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit - MontBell EX Light Do=
wn Jacket - Justin Jackson
 To: [email protected]
 Date: Fri=
day, January 20, 2017, 8:29 PM
 
 Justin, welcome to
 BackpackGearTest.org,=
 and thanks for your Owner Review.
 I=E2=80=99ll be your editor. This is a =
good start at a first OR,
 and I look forward to working with you to get it=
 ready for
 posting.
 =C2=A0 
  Before getting
 to specific edits, you need=
 to re-organize your OR a bit.
 Your OR reads more like one of our Test Rep=
orts - Initial
 Review of the product out of the box, followed by Field
 Re=
view and Long Term Review after backcountry use.=C2=A0 An OR
 is different =
- you're describing your experience with
 your own gear. You need to reorga=
nize your text so that
 first you describe the product, then in the next se=
ction
 give a summary of field use, and finally provide your
 observations =
on performance. Take a look at some other ORs
 for examples.=C2=A0 I think =
all necessary data are included in
 what you posted; they just need re-arra=
nging. Please
 don't take this as major criticism; your OR is far
 better t=
han the average first-timer's. All we need to do
 is get it info standard B=
GT format.
 =C2=A0 
  
  After revising you need to
 do two things. Post th=
e html version of the Report in the
 Tests/Owner Reviews folder on Backpack=
GearTest.org, and post
 the plain text version here, with "Repost," the
 pr=
oduct name, and your name in the subject line, and with a
 tinyurl link to =
the html version in the body of your
 message.
  
 
 
 Thanks,
  
 
 
 Rich=
ard Lyon, BGT Editor
  
 
 

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      <p>Hey Richard,<br>
<br>
Thank you for the feedback!  I think I can get that done today or tomorrow.=
  Ill check out some ORs on the site to get a better idea for acceptable fo=
rmat/content.  I just wanted to respond so you knew I got the email.  <br>
<br>
Justin <br>
<br>
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On Fri, 1/20/17, [email protected] [BackpackGearTest] &lt;BackpackGe=
[email protected]&gt; wrote:<br>
<br>
Subject: [BackpackGearTest] Edit - MontBell EX Light Down Jacket - Justin J=
ackson<br>
 To: [email protected]<br>
 Date: Friday, January 20, 2017, 8:29 PM<br>
 <br>
 Justin, welcome to<br>
 BackpackGearTest.org, and thanks for your Owner Review.<br>
 I=E2=80=99ll be your editor. This is a good start at a first OR,<br>
 and I look forward to working with you to get it ready for<br>
 posting.<br>
 =C2=A0 <br>
  Before getting<br>
 to specific edits, you need to re-organize your OR a bit.<br>
 Your OR reads more like one of our Test Reports - Initial<br>
 Review of the product out of the box, followed by Field<br>
 Review and Long Term Review after backcountry use.=C2=A0 An OR<br>
 is different - you&#39;re describing your experience with<br>
 your own gear. You need to reorganize your text so that<br>
 first you describe the product, then in the next section<br>
 give a summary of field use, and finally provide your<br>
 observations on performance. Take a look at some other ORs<br>
 for examples.=C2=A0 I think all necessary data are included in<br>
 what you posted; they just need re-arranging. Please<br>
 don&#39;t take this as major criticism; your OR is far<br>
 better than the average first-timer&#39;s. All we need to do<br>
 is get it info standard BGT format.<br>
 =C2=A0 <br>
  <br>
  After revising you need to<br>
 do two things. Post the html version of the Report in the<br>
 Tests/Owner Reviews folder on BackpackGearTest.org, and post<br>
 the plain text version here, with &quot;Repost,&quot; the<br>
 product name, and your name in the subject line, and with a<br>
 tinyurl link to the html version in the body of your<br>
 message.<br>
  <br>
 <br>
 <br>
 Thanks,<br>
  <br>
 <br>
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 Richard Lyon, BGT Editor<br>
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