EDIT/APPROVAL 0 Nunatak Kobuk Down Parka - Richard Lyon
"'Kathy Waters' kathy-UFS7mITjnAiGkU+Z+ufpa1aTQe2KTcn/@public.gmane.org [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> Fri, 24 Mar 2017 13:52:24 -0600
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Richard,
Just a few things to edit/consider. Please delete your test file when you
upload to the new folder at:
http://www.backpackgeartest.org/reviews/Clothing/Jackets/Nunatak%20Kobuk%20D
own%20Parka/
Thanks for all your interesting ORs!
Kathy
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The Kobuk is a puffy down jacket with a removeable hood.
EDIT: "removable"
Nunatak makes and sells high quality down products - garments for use from
head to toe, sleeping quilts, sleeping bags.
COMMENT/Edit: I think you need an "and" or "etc." here Either "sleeping
quilts and sleeping bags" or "sleeping quilts, sleeping bags, etc." ??
Should you consider purchasing from Nunatak and are weight-conscious, I
recommend that you inquire of the company just what will your size and
special features cost in grams and price.
EDIT: How about "If weight-conscious and considering a purchase from
Nunatak, I recommend inquiring of the company just what the desired size and
special features will cost in grams and price." to get rid of the dreaded
projection pronouns "you" and "your".
The Kobuk has an elastic waistband is easily adjusted with plastic toggles
at the waist immediately below the outside pockets.
Edit: Reads oddly to me - maybe "waistband that is easily"?
I 'll throw the Kobuk on in the front country in particularly nasty weather,
especially for dog walks.
EDIT: Need to omit the space in "I'll" between the I and the apostrophe
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<p><div class="WordSection1"><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";">Richard,<o></o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";"><o> </o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";">Just a few things to edit/consider. Please delete your test file when you upload to the new folder at:<o></o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";"><a href="http://www.backpackgeartest.org/reviews/Clothing/Jackets/Nunatak%20Kobuk%20Down%20Parka/">http://www.backpackgeartest.org/reviews/Clothing/Jacke
ts/Nunatak%20Kobuk%20Down%20Parka/</a><o></o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";"><o> </o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";">Thanks for all your interesting ORs!<o></o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";"><o> </o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";">Kathy<o></o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";">______________<o></o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span styl
e="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;">The Kobuk is a puffy down jacket with a removeable hood.<o></o></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;">EDIT: “removable”<o></o></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;"><o> </o></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;">Nunatak makes and sells high quality down products - garments for use from head to toe, sleeping quilts, sleeping bags. <o></o></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;">COMMENT/Edit: I think you need an “and” or “etc.” here Either “sleeping quilts and sleeping bags” or “sleeping quilts, sleeping bags, etc.” ??<o></o><
/span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;"><o> </o></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;">Should you consider purchasing from Nunatak and are weight-conscious, I recommend that you inquire of the company just what will your size and special features cost in grams and price.<o></o></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;">EDIT: How about “</span>If weight-conscious and considering a purchase from Nunatak, I recommend inquiring of the company just what the desired size and special features will cost in grams and price.” <span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;">to get rid of the dreaded projection pronouns “you” and “your”.<o></o></spa
n></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;"><o> </o></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;">The Kobuk has an elastic waistband is easily adjusted with plastic toggles at the waist immediately below the outside pockets.</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Times New Roman","serif";color:black;"><br></span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;">Edit: Reads oddly to me – maybe “waistband that is easily”?<o></o></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;"><o> </o></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;color:black;">I 'll throw the Kobuk on in the front country in particularly nasty weather, especially for d
og walks. </span><o></o></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";">EDIT: Need to omit the space in “I’ll” between the I and the apostrophe<o></o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";"><o> </o></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:"Georgia","serif";"><o> </o></span></b></p></div></p>
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