EDIT: Owner Review Chacos ZX/2 Sandals
"'Kathy Waters' kathy-UFS7mITjnAiGkU+Z+ufpa1aTQe2KTcn/@public.gmane.org [BackpackGearTest]" <[email protected]> Wed, 29 Mar 2017 10:55:29 -0600
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Kelsea,
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d "COMMENT" - just that, no changes needed.
If you would please make the corrections and then upload the HTML into the =
OR test folder, I'll promptly check that and get you approved for this one.=
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Thanks and welcome again to BGT. Great to have you!
Kathy
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Chacos are a strap sandal with a thick rubber Vibrum sole.=20=20
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which runs small, because I normally fit a Women's US 7.5.=20=20=20
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The Vibrum soles also gripped well on the smooth sandstone, and rougher por=
tions of the desert trail.=20=20
EDIT: Vibram and please delete the extra space between =E2=80=9Cof=E2=80=
=9D and =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D.
The toe strap and anti-slip soles also helped my foot from sliding out of t=
he shoe and touching the hot ground.=20=20
EDIT: Change "soles" plural to "sole" singular to match the rest of the se=
ntence. This is my downfall when I write as well - mixing singular and plu=
rals when writing about feet/foot or any other body part that has "two part=
s"! :)
I like to push the toe strap to the side when I want to wear these sandals =
with socks.
COMMENT: You need some TOE-SOCKS, girl! :)
The strapping system can be replaced if the fabric chord ever becomes worn =
down.
EDIT/edit/COMMENT: Is "chord" a Canadian thing or did you mean "cord"? =
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The Vibrum soles are durable and grip easily to almost any trail type. The=
se soles are also replaceable if the tread ever wears out.
EDIT: Vibram
The buckling system allows for me to easily release and take off my sandal=
s.
EDIT: Please delete the extra space between =E2=80=9Coff=E2=80=9D and =E2=
=80=9Cmy=E2=80=9D.
They are also one of my favorite every-day shoe since they are so comfortab=
le.
EDIT: Should be =E2=80=9Cshoes=E2=80=9D plural since you used =E2=80=9CThe=
y=E2=80=9D which is plural.
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<p>Kelsea,<br>
<br>
Hi! Thank you for submitting your second OR for editing. I've read yo=
ur text and below are my edits for you. They are written as "EDIT&quo=
t; - must change, "edit" - should probably change unless you have=
a really good reason and "COMMENT" - just that, no changes neede=
d.<br>
<br>
If you would please make the corrections and then upload the HTML into the =
OR test folder, I'll promptly check that and get you approved for this =
one. <br>
<br>
Thanks and welcome again to BGT. Great to have you!<br>
<br>
Kathy<br>
___________________________<br>
<br>
Chacos are a strap sandal with a thick rubber Vibrum sole. <br>
EDIT: Should be =E2=80=9CVibram=E2=80=9D.<br>
<br>
The size I own is Woman's US 8 ; <br>
EDIT: Please delete the extra space between =E2=80=9CI=E2=80=9D and =E2=80=
=9Cown=E2=80=9D and also the extra space between =E2=80=9C8=E2=80=9D and th=
e semicolon.<br>
<br>
which runs small, because I normally fit a Women's US 7.5. <br>
EDIT: One more extra space between =E2=80=9Ca=E2=80=9D and =E2=80=9CWomen=
=E2=80=99s=E2=80=9D.<br>
<br>
EDIT: In the caption, should be =E2=80=9CVibram=E2=80=9D.<br>
<br>
The Vibrum soles also gripped well on the smooth sandstone, and rougher por=
tions of the desert trail. <br>
EDIT: Vibram and please delete the extra space between =E2=80=9Cof=E2=80=
=9D and =E2=80=9Cthe=E2=80=9D.<br>
<br>
The toe strap and anti-slip soles also helped my foot from sliding out of t=
he shoe and touching the hot ground. <br>
EDIT: Change "soles" plural to "sole" singular to matc=
h the rest of the sentence. This is my downfall when I write as well - mix=
ing singular and plurals when writing about feet/foot or any other body par=
t that has "two parts"! :)<br>
<br>
I like to push the toe strap to the side when I want to wear these sandals =
with socks.<br>
COMMENT: You need some TOE-SOCKS, girl! :)<br>
<br>
The strapping system can be replaced if the fabric chord ever becomes worn =
down.<br>
EDIT/edit/COMMENT: Is "chord" a Canadian thing or did you mean &=
quot;cord"? <br>
<br>
The Vibrum soles are durable and grip easily to almost any trail type. The=
se soles are also replaceable if the tread ever wears out.<br>
EDIT: Vibram<br>
<br>
The buckling system allows for me to easily release and take off my sandal=
s.<br>
EDIT: Please delete the extra space between =E2=80=9Coff=E2=80=9D and =E2=
=80=9Cmy=E2=80=9D.<br>
<br>
They are also one of my favorite every-day shoe since they are so comfortab=
le.<br>
EDIT: Should be =E2=80=9Cshoes=E2=80=9D plural since you used =E2=80=9CThe=
y=E2=80=9D which is plural.<br>
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