(GRE Success! ) Sentence Correction Game..
Srihari Yamanoor <[email protected]> Tue, 14 Aug 2012 18:13:42 -0700
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Hello Everyone, Almost no one responded to the last one and I don't even remember what I sent out. I am hoping things turn around this time. Here is the sentence: " Was the bank's efforts on display last week when the Department of Justice announced that it will not be bringing criminal charges against the bank? " Source: http://www.fiercefinance.com/story/did-lobbying-save-goldman-sachs/2012-08-13?utm_medium=nl&utm_source=internal Is there anything wrong with that sentence? Write in your responses. Good Luck, Srihari -- Home: http://www.yamanoor.com/ Photography: http://www.yamanoor.net/ Laughs: http://ysrihari.blogspot.com/ Medical Devices: http://chaaraka.blogspot.com/ Earth: http://itshothere.org/