(GRE Success! ) Sentence Correction Game..

Srihari Yamanoor <[email protected]> Tue, 14 Aug 2012 18:13:42 -0700
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Hello Everyone,

Almost no one responded to the last one and I don't even remember what I
sent out. I am hoping things turn around this time.

Here is the sentence: " Was the bank's efforts on display last week when
the Department of Justice announced that it will not be bringing criminal
charges against the bank? "

Source:
http://www.fiercefinance.com/story/did-lobbying-save-goldman-sachs/2012-08-13?utm_medium=nl&utm_source=internal


Is there anything wrong with that sentence? Write in your responses.

Good Luck,

Srihari

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