: Editorial nit w/SIP draft
"Glen Zorn (gwz)" <[email protected]> Mon, 17 Oct 2005 18:58:07 -0700
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Description of issue: Improper English language usage Submitter name: Glen Zorn Submitter email address: [email protected] Date first submitted: 17 Oct 05 Document: sip Comment type: E Priority: 1 Section: 3 Rationale/Explanation of issue: "advertisement", not "advertising" Lengthy description of problem: Paragraph 8 says "Advertising of this application is specified in Section 6." Requested change: "Advertisement of this application is specified in Section 6."