Re: Non-technical comments on draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl-ext-mcm -02.txt

Hi -

> From: <[email protected]>
> To: <[email protected]>; <[email protected]>
> Sent: Wednesday, March 24, 2004 4:12 AM
> Subject: RE: [Adslmib] Non-technical comments on draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl-ext-mcm -02.txt
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>   I'll change the order so that the "Acknowledgements" section
> appears before the "Security Considerations" section. Actually, I used the
> VDSL MIB RFC 3728 as a guide to the ordering of the paragraphs. Did I miss
> something here ?
...

I think the recommended section order has been tweaked in
various versions of rfc2223bis.  It is something I normally
check when reviewing a document.  I do recall corresponding
with the authors of rfc2223bis regarding omissions / ambiguities
in the section ordering, so it wouldn't surprise me if RFC 3728
is aligned with a possible interpretation of some earlier version
of rfc2223bis.  There are certainly more important things to
worry about, but there's no point in variance from rfc2223bis
without a good reason.

Randy