Re: FW: Propoed Errata for RFC 4319

Hi Menachem,

On 1/7/2007, I submitted the errata to the RFC editor.  I should have 
copied the group.  One point in the errata has already been covered by 
Alfred Hines.  A lot of the other points that I enumerated were also 
previously identified by Alfred Hines.  Hopefully the RFC editor will 
complete this work shortly.

Best Regards,
Clay

On 1/14/2007 3:30 AM, Menachem Dodge wrote:
>  Hello,
>
> 	Firstly, I wish everyone a very Happy, Healthy and Prosperous
> New Year.
>
> 	I haven't seen any response to Clay's request for errata on RFC
> 4319. Please inform Clay of any issues
> by the end of this week.
>
> 	Thank you kindly,
> 	Menachem.
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Clay Sikes [mailto:[email protected]] 
> Sent: Thursday, December 28, 2006 6:17 PM
> To: IETF ADSL MIB Working Group; Michael Sneed
> Cc: [email protected]
> Subject: [Adslmib] Propoed Errata for RFC 4319
>
> Hi,
>
> I would like to propose the following RFC errata for RFC 4319 
> (http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4319.txt).  Please let me know by January 6 
> if there are any issues.
>
>
> Figure 2, page 10
>         =2=    SHDSL optional wire-pair-2 (Not applicable to HDSL2)
>
> Should be:
>         =2=    SHDSL optional wire-pair-2 (Not applicable to HDSL2)
>                    and SHDSL.bis optional wire-pair-3 and wire-pair-4
>                    (not applicable to HDSL2 and 'classic' SHDSL)
>
>
> Section 2.7, page 11, second bullet, last paragraph
>         The index value for this profile is a locally-unique
>
> Should be:
>         The index value for these profiles is a locally-unique
>
>
> Page 15, Revision December 7, 2005, description text
>         2.  Modified all rates such that their rates are only
>
> Should be:
>         2.  Modified all rates such that they are only
>
>
> Page 16, Hdsl2ShdslPerfCurrDayCount, second paragraph in the description
>         Hdsl2Shdsl1DayIntevalCount, and the current interval gauge
>
> Should be:
>         Hdsl2Shdsl1DayIntervalCount, and the current interval gauge
>
>
> Page 17, Hdsl2ShdslPerfIntervalThreshold , description
>         a 15-minute interval numbers at most 900, objects of this
>
> Should be:
>         a 15-minute interval numbers is at most 900, objects of this
>
>
> Page 18, Hdsl2ShdslWirePair , description
>         wire), and G.shdsl.bis support an optional third pair
>
> Should be:
>         wire), and G.shdsl.bis lines support an optional third pair
>
>
> Page 45, hdsl2ShdslSpanConfMinLineRate, description
>         If the minimum line rate equals the maximum line rate
>         (hdsl2ShdslSpanMaxLineRate), the line rate is considered
>         'fixed'. 
>
> Should be:
>         If the minimum line rate equals the maximum line rate
>         (hdsl2ShdslSpanConfMaxLineRate), the line rate is considered
>         'fixed'.
>
>
> Page 46, hdsl2ShdslSpanConfMaxLineRate, description
>         If the minimum line rate equals the maximum line rate
>          (hdsl2ShdslSpanMaxLineRate), the line rate is considered
>          'fixed'. 
>
> Should be:
>         If the minimum line rate (hdsl2ShdslSpanConfMinLineRate) equals
>          the maximum line rate, the line rate is considered
>          'fixed'. 
>
>
> Best Regards,
> Clay Sikes
>
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