RE: draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-04.txt

Hello All,

	Many thanks to the editors for there good work in producing this
draft. 

	I would like to call upon the working group to review this
draft, which is now quite mature, and provide feedback and comments to
the editors.

	Best Regards,
	Menachem
	

> _____________________________________________ 
> From: 	Moti Morgenstern  
> Sent:	Tuesday, January 29, 2008 10:37 AM
> To:	'[email protected]'
> Cc:	'Romascanu, Dan \(Dan\)'; Menachem Dodge
> Subject:	draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-04.txt
> 
> Hello all,
> 
> I've submitted the -04 version to the internet-drafts. 
> 
> Here are the changes included in this revision compared to -03
> revision. Many changes are due to the fact that ITU-T G.997.1 was
> updated while we were working on this draft document.
> 
> -	Added the G.997.1 Amendment 1 to the references. Also mentions
> it where needed (e.g., where G.997.1 is mentioned in the description
> and near affected parameters).
> -	Updated the definition of Xdsl2LineClassMask and
> Xdsl2LineUs0Mask per G.997.1 Amendment 1.
> -	Updated the definition of xdsl2ChStatusLPath per G.997.1
> Amendment 1.
> -	Updated the description of xdsl2LConfProfClassMask and changed
> its default value per G.997.1 Amendment 1.
> -	Updated the description of xdsl2ChStatusInpReport per G.997.1
> Amendment 1.
> -	Added Maximum delay variation (xdsl2ChConfProfMaxDelayVar) and
> Channel Initialization Policy Selection (xdsl2ChConfProfInitPolicy) to
> channel configuration profile, per amendment 1.
> -	Added a group for optional channel level configuration
> parameters. Currently holds the xdsl2ChConfProfMaxDelayVar and
> xdsl2ChConfProfInitPolicy.
> -	Also added Xdsl2ChInitPolicy TC to serve the
> xdsl2ChConfProfInitPolicy attribute.
> -	Minor correction in the reference clause of ratio parameters
> included in the xdsl2LineConfTemplateEntry. Also updated their
> description clause.
> -	Minor correction in the reference clause of parameters included
> in the Xdsl2LineInventoryEntry
> -	Corrected the definition of xdsl2LConfProfMsgMinUs/Ds
> -	Corrected the description of Xdsl2LineCeFlag TC.
> -	Revised the description of Xdsl2LineForceInp TC.
> -	Revised the description of Xdsl2Band TC and the description of
> xdsl2LineBand index (i.e., main point is that 'upstream' and
> 'downstream' are used also for VDSL2) 
> -	Minor correction in the description of Xdsl2Tssi TC and the
> description of xdsl2SCStatusSegmentTssi attribute. Moved the attribute
> to the xdsl2LineTable (now it is called: xdsl2LineStatusTssiDs and
> xdsl2LineStatusTssiUs) because it's actually per line+direction (and
> not related to the DELT), similar to the Trellis related status
> parameters, rather than per sub-carrier.
> -	Added Xdsl2MRefPsdDs and Xdsl2MRefPsdUs TCs
> -	Added xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdDs and xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdUs to
> xdsl2LineTable
> -	Xdsl2ChInitPolicy added to the IMPORT list
> -	Changed the names prefix of all groups from vdsl2xxxx to
> xdsl2xxxx
> 
> Updated DESCRIPTION of xdsl2LineCnfgFallbackTemplate 
> ----------------------------------------------------
> - Updated description to make it clear that this attribute
>   is optional.
> - Specified how the fallback mechanism should behave
>   if the xTU-C fails to train up using the fallback template.
> 
> 
> Updated "Managing Profiles And Templates" Section
> -------------------------------------------------
> - Updated this section to make it clear that the
>   xdsl2LineCnfgFallbackTemplate attribute
>   is optional.
> - Specified how the fallback mechanism should behave
>   if the xTU-C fails to train up using the fallback template.
> 
> 
> Updated "Security Considerations" Section
> -----------------------------------------
> - Mentioned the security implications of unwanted
>   changes to the xdsl2LineCnfgFallbackTemplate attribute.
> 
> 
> Updated TC 'Xdsl2OperationModes'
> --------------------------------
> - Update enumerated values to include ADSL modes.
> - Updated the DESCRIPTION clause to be consistent
>   with the new enumerated values.
> 
> 
> Updated TC 'Xdsl2MrefPsdDs'
> ---------------------------
> - Changed DESCRIPTION clause.
>   Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
>   of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
>   the OCTET STRING.
> 
> 
> Updated TC 'Xdsl2MrefPsdUs'
> ---------------------------
> - Changed DESCRIPTION clause.
>   Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
>   of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
>   the OCTET STRING.
> 
> 
> Updated DESCRIPTION of xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdDs
> -----------------------------------------------
> - Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
>   of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
>   the OCTET STRING.
> 
> 
> Updated DESCRIPTION of xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdUs
> -----------------------------------------------
> - Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
>   of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
>   the OCTET STRING.
> 
> 
> Updated "Textual Conventions" Section
> -------------------------------------
> - Changed description of Xdsl2OperationModes TC.
>   Replaced "ADSL mode" with "xDSL mode" in 2 places.
> - Changed description of Xdsl2MrefPsdDs TC.
>   Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
>   of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
>   the OCTET STRING.
> - Changed description of Xdsl2MrefPsdUs TC.
>   Specified the use of a variable length OCTET STRING instead
>   of specifying the number of breakpoints as the first byte of
>   the OCTET STRING.
> 
> -	Copyright statements updated.    
> -	Corrected 3 typos where "Overlapeed" used instead of
> "Overlapped"
> -	Deleted editor notes not required any more
> -	Other minor editorial corrections (e.g., idnits comments for
> Xdsl2BpscResult, xdsl2LineCmndConfBpscFailReason, Xdsl2LineForceInp,
> xdsl2LineCmndConfLdsf, xdsl2LineSegmentEntry,
> xdsl2LineSegmentBitsAlloc, xdsl2LineBandTable,
> xdsl2LineBandStatusLnAtten, xdsl2LineBandStatusSigAtten,
> xdsl2LineBandStatusSnrMargin, xdsl2SCStatusRowStatus,
> xdsl2SCStatusSegmentEntry, xdsl2SCStatusSegmentLinImg,
> xdsl2SCStatusSegmentSnr, xdsl2SCStatusSegmentBitsAlloc,
> xdsl2LineConfTemplateTable, xdsl2LConfTempChan1RaRatioDs/Us,
> xdsl2LConfTempChan2RaRatioUs, xdsl2LConfTempChan3RaRatioDs/Us,
> xdsl2LConfProfRfiBands, xdsl2LConfProfTxRefVnDs/Us,
> xdsl2LConfProfDpboEPsd, xdsl2LConfProfDpboEsCableModelA/B/C,
> xdsl2LConfProfDpboMus, xdsl2LConfProfUpboKL,
> xdsl2LineConfProfModeSpecBandUsTable, xdsl2LConfProfUpboPsdA/B,
> vdsl2LineBpscGroup, vdsl2LineBpscGroup, vdsl2LineSegmentGroup)
> -	Added acknowledgments
> 
> Best Regards,
> Moti Morgenstern
> 
> 
>

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