draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-05.txt

Hi all,

I've submitted the -05 revision to the internet-drafts.

The changes included in this revision, compared to -04 revision, are summarized in the following lines.

Regards,
Moti

Changes in -04 towards -05
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-         Changed dates and draft number in the title
-         Added VDSL2 specific states to Xdsl2LastTransmittedState TC
-         Data rate related objects - removed the upper values bound for some future-proofing.
-         Textual improvements suggested by Clay Sikes. Main changes:
        o       Textual changes in order to have 'Figure 1' on a single page.
        o       Use 'xTU', 'xTU-C' and 'xTU-R' consistently
        o       Revised the text for Xdsl2PowerMngState textual convention
        o       Use the term 'subcarrier' consistently.
        o       RFI abbreviation is explained in Xdsl2RfiBands textual convention
        o       xdsl2SCStatusLinScale values range is 1..65535
        o       xdsl2SCStatusLogMt values range is 1..65535
        o       xdsl2SCStatusQlnMt values range is 1..65535
        o       xdsl2SCStatusSnrMtime values range is 1..65535
        o       Use limited values range for xdsl2LineStatusAttainableRateDs/Us and  xdsl2SCStatusAttainableRate
        o       Changed 'zero length' to 'zero-length', '24 hours' to '24-hours', and '15 minutes' to '15-minutes' where required.
        o       Revised the description of xdsl2PMChHist15MinTable and xdsl2PMChHist15MinEntry
        o       Revised the description of xdsl2PMChHist1DTable and xdsl2PMChHist1DEntry
-         Corrected errors in REFERENCE clause
        o       xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdDs - MREFpsds changed to MREFPSDds.
        o       xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdUs - MREFpsus changed to MREFPSDus.
        o       xdsl2LineStatusTrellisDs - Added the identifier TRELLISds.
        o       xdsl2LineStatusTrellisUs - Added the identifier TRELLISus.
        o       xdsl2LineStatusActualCe - Added the identifier ACTUALCE.
-         The REFERENCE for all threshold attributes corrected to paragraph 7.2.7.2
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinFecs
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinEs
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinSes
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinLoss
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinUas
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinFecs
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinEs
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinSes
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinLoss
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinUas
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileThresh15MinFailedFullInt
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileThresh15MinFailedShrtInt
        o       xdsl2ChAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2ChAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinCorrected
        o       xdsl2ChAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2ChAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinCorrected
-         The REFERENCE for PM attributes are more detailed
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr15MFecs
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr15MEs
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr15MSes
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr15MLoss
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr15MUas
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr1DayFecs
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr1DayEs
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr1DaySes
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr1DayLoss
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr1DayUas
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr15MFullInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr15MFailedFullInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr15MShortInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr15MFailedShortInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr1DayFullInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr1DayFailedFullInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr1DayShortInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr1DayFailedShortInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLHist15MFecs
        o       xdsl2PMLHist15MEs
        o       xdsl2PMLHist15MSes
        o       xdsl2PMLHist15MLoss
        o       xdsl2PMLHist15MUas
        o       xdsl2PMLHist1DFecs
        o       xdsl2PMLHist1DEs
        o       xdsl2PMLHist1DSes
        o       xdsl2PMLHist1DLoss
        o       xdsl2PMLHist1DUas
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist15MFullInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist15MFailedFullInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist15MShortInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist15MFailedShortInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist1DFullInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist1DFailedFullInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist1DShortInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist1DFailedShortInits (changed also the object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMChCurr15MCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2PMChCurr15MCorrectedBlocks
        o       xdsl2PMChCurr1DayCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2PMChCurr1DayCorrectedBlocks
        o       xdsl2PMChHist15MCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2PMChHist15MCorrectedBlocks
        o       xdsl2PMChHist1DCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2PMChHist1DCorrectedBlocks
-         Added the ITU G.997.1 identifier to the REFERENCE clause of many objects. Where relevant, the identifier is also part of the DESCRIPTION clause.
-         Changed the name of xdsl2PMLineCurrInitTable to xdsl2PMLineInitCurrTable
        o       Changed the names of all attributes in that table accordingly.
        o       Changed xdsl2PMLineCurrInitGroup to xdsl2PMLineInitCurrGroup accordingly.
        o       Changed xdsl2PMLineCurrInitShortGroup to xdsl2PMLineInitCurrShortGroup accordingly.
-         Changed the name of all objects in xdsl2PMLineInitHist15MinTable and xdsl2PMLineInitHist1DayTable
-         xdsl2LConfTempChan1RaRatioDs (and similar objects) UNITS changed to "percent" from "percents".
-         In the "Implementation Analysis" section, when discussing the table that addresses mode-specific parameters, the text was revised as there are multiple ADSL modes (previously the draft included a common 'adsl' mode)
-         In Textual Conventions descriptions
        o       Xdsl2Unit: make comments regarding this type consistent.
-         Naming Conventions
        o       Expand CRC to "Cyclic Redundancy Check"
        o       Changed, in the description of xTU, "terminal" to "line termination" to be consistent with previous naming conventions.
        o       Other minor corrections
-         Other minor editorial corrections.