FW: draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-05.txt - Working Group Last Call

MIB Doctors,

Please be aware about the WGLC going on in the ADSLMIB WG for
draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-05.txt. If you have time and interest to review
the document at this phase please send your comments to the WG list, cc
mib-doctors. Volunteers for later reviews are also welcome. 

Thanks and Regards,

Dan


-----Original Message-----
From: Menachem Dodge [mailto:[email protected]] 
Sent: Monday, June 02, 2008 10:34 AM
To: Moti Morgenstern; '[email protected]'; [email protected];
[email protected]
Cc: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); [email protected]; [email protected]
Subject: RE: draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-05.txt - Working Group Last Call


Hi,

        Firstly, many thanks to the editors Moti, Umberto and Scott for
their great effort in producing this document.
Also many thanks to Clay for reviewing the document.

        The editors are now satisfied with the document so I am
announcing Working Group last call on the document.
I request that everyone take the time to review this document and
provide their feed-back on the mailing list.

        The Working Group Last Call will be completed on Thursday 26th
June. Due to the length of the document, I am allowing more than three
weeks and expect that the Working Group will provide their comments in
this time.

        Best Regards,
        Menachem




-----Original Message-----
From: Moti Morgenstern
Sent: Sunday, June 01, 2008 5:11 PM
To: '[email protected]'
Cc: Menachem Dodge
Subject: draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-05.txt

Hi all,

I've submitted the -05 revision to the internet-drafts.

The changes included in this revision, compared to -04 revision, are
summarized in the following lines.

Regards,
Moti

Changes in -04 towards -05
====================
-         Changed dates and draft number in the title
-         Added VDSL2 specific states to Xdsl2LastTransmittedState TC
-         Data rate related objects - removed the upper values bound for
some future-proofing.
-         Textual improvements suggested by Clay Sikes. Main changes:
        o       Textual changes in order to have 'Figure 1' on a single
page.
        o       Use 'xTU', 'xTU-C' and 'xTU-R' consistently
        o       Revised the text for Xdsl2PowerMngState textual
convention
        o       Use the term 'subcarrier' consistently.
        o       RFI abbreviation is explained in Xdsl2RfiBands textual
convention
        o       xdsl2SCStatusLinScale values range is 1..65535
        o       xdsl2SCStatusLogMt values range is 1..65535
        o       xdsl2SCStatusQlnMt values range is 1..65535
        o       xdsl2SCStatusSnrMtime values range is 1..65535
        o       Use limited values range for
xdsl2LineStatusAttainableRateDs/Us and  xdsl2SCStatusAttainableRate
        o       Changed 'zero length' to 'zero-length', '24 hours' to
'24-hours', and '15 minutes' to '15-minutes' where required.
        o       Revised the description of xdsl2PMChHist15MinTable and
xdsl2PMChHist15MinEntry
        o       Revised the description of xdsl2PMChHist1DTable and
xdsl2PMChHist1DEntry
-         Corrected errors in REFERENCE clause
        o       xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdDs - MREFpsds changed to
MREFPSDds.
        o       xdsl2LineStatusMrefPsdUs - MREFpsus changed to
MREFPSDus.
        o       xdsl2LineStatusTrellisDs - Added the identifier
TRELLISds.
        o       xdsl2LineStatusTrellisUs - Added the identifier
TRELLISus.
        o       xdsl2LineStatusActualCe - Added the identifier ACTUALCE.
-         The REFERENCE for all threshold attributes corrected to
paragraph 7.2.7.2
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinFecs
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinEs
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinSes
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinLoss
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinUas
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinFecs
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinEs
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinSes
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinLoss
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinUas
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileThresh15MinFailedFullInt
        o       xdsl2LineAlarmConfProfileThresh15MinFailedShrtInt
        o       xdsl2ChAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2ChAlarmConfProfileXtucThresh15MinCorrected
        o       xdsl2ChAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2ChAlarmConfProfileXturThresh15MinCorrected
-         The REFERENCE for PM attributes are more detailed
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr15MFecs
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr15MEs
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr15MSes
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr15MLoss
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr15MUas
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr1DayFecs
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr1DayEs
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr1DaySes
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr1DayLoss
        o       xdsl2PMLCurr1DayUas
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr15MFullInits (changed also the object's
name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr15MFailedFullInits (changed also the
object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr15MShortInits (changed also the object's
name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr15MFailedShortInits (changed also the
object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr1DayFullInits (changed also the object's
name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr1DayFailedFullInits (changed also the
object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr1DayShortInits (changed also the
object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitCurr1DayFailedShortInits (changed also the
object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLHist15MFecs
        o       xdsl2PMLHist15MEs
        o       xdsl2PMLHist15MSes
        o       xdsl2PMLHist15MLoss
        o       xdsl2PMLHist15MUas
        o       xdsl2PMLHist1DFecs
        o       xdsl2PMLHist1DEs
        o       xdsl2PMLHist1DSes
        o       xdsl2PMLHist1DLoss
        o       xdsl2PMLHist1DUas
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist15MFullInits (changed also the object's
name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist15MFailedFullInits (changed also the
object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist15MShortInits (changed also the object's
name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist15MFailedShortInits (changed also the
object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist1DFullInits (changed also the object's
name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist1DFailedFullInits (changed also the
object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist1DShortInits (changed also the object's
name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMLInitHist1DFailedShortInits (changed also the
object's name, see ahead)
        o       xdsl2PMChCurr15MCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2PMChCurr15MCorrectedBlocks
        o       xdsl2PMChCurr1DayCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2PMChCurr1DayCorrectedBlocks
        o       xdsl2PMChHist15MCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2PMChHist15MCorrectedBlocks
        o       xdsl2PMChHist1DCodingViolations
        o       xdsl2PMChHist1DCorrectedBlocks
-         Added the ITU G.997.1 identifier to the REFERENCE clause of
many objects. Where relevant, the identifier is also part of the
DESCRIPTION clause.
-         Changed the name of xdsl2PMLineCurrInitTable to
xdsl2PMLineInitCurrTable
        o       Changed the names of all attributes in that table
accordingly.
        o       Changed xdsl2PMLineCurrInitGroup to
xdsl2PMLineInitCurrGroup accordingly.
        o       Changed xdsl2PMLineCurrInitShortGroup to
xdsl2PMLineInitCurrShortGroup accordingly.
-         Changed the name of all objects in
xdsl2PMLineInitHist15MinTable and xdsl2PMLineInitHist1DayTable
-         xdsl2LConfTempChan1RaRatioDs (and similar objects) UNITS
changed to "percent" from "percents".
-         In the "Implementation Analysis" section, when discussing the
table that addresses mode-specific parameters, the text was revised as
there are multiple ADSL modes (previously the draft included a common
'adsl' mode)
-         In Textual Conventions descriptions
        o       Xdsl2Unit: make comments regarding this type consistent.
-         Naming Conventions
        o       Expand CRC to "Cyclic Redundancy Check"
        o       Changed, in the description of xTU, "terminal" to "line
termination" to be consistent with previous naming conventions.
        o       Other minor corrections
-         Other minor editorial corrections.