Further Comments on draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-05.txt

Menachem Dodge <[email protected]> Sat, 28 Jun 2008 23:49:38 +0300

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Editors,

    I have the following additional comments:

    Line #1081: OLD   --->  "indicated in octets 0-1"
                      NEW --->  "indicated by octets 0-1"

    Line #1097: OLD   --->  "indicated in octets 0-1"
                      NEW --->  "indicated by octets 0-1"

    Line #1557: "xtUs" should be "xTUs"

    Line #1582: "Similarly" replace by "In a similar manner".

    Section 2.9, Paragraph 3 Lines #1779 and #1780 - remove the repetition of "FEC Seconds".



Best Regards,
Menachem

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