Comments on draft-ietf-bmwg-sip-bench-term-09

My general comments about draft-ietf-bmwg-sip-bench-term-09
1) Where the term has an associated acronym, include that acronym in the
definition title ... this is done in some cases, but not in others
2) Replace instances of "work item" with "document"
3) In section "3.4.2 Registration Rates", the document says:

This benchmark is obtained with zero failures in which 100% of the
      registrations attempted by the EA are successfully completed by
      the DUT.

Is "zero failures" redundant in the above text since 100% success would
imply "zero failures"?

I've sent smaller comments directly to the authors.

Regards,

Bill Cerveny