Adrian Farrel's No Objection on draft-ietf-bmwg-bgp-basic-convergence-04: (with COMMENT)

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for addressing Terry's Routing Directorate review.

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I liked the understatement of
   BGP is ... used by several service providers as the
   default Inter AS routing protocol.

Several == "more than two but not many"

Perhaps you could s/several/many/