Re: REG: Draft https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-kishjac-bmwg-evpntest/

Hi Marius,

Thanks for the comment. Much appreciated. I will incorporate all your findings.

Regards,
Sudhin

From: Marius Georgescu [mailto:[email protected]]
Sent: Thursday, September 1, 2016 7:10 AM
To: Sudhin Jacob <[email protected]>
Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]
Subject: Re: [bmwg] REG: Draft https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-kishjac-bmwg-evpntest/

Hi Sudhin,

Here are my comments for:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-kishjac-bmwg-evpntest-02

I think that including PBB-EVPN was a good start towards improving this draft.
It also didn’t seem very difficult to do.

My comments about your other draft (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-jacpra-bmwg-pmtest-01), I think stand here as well.

-1- Better structure, clarity and proofreading. It is a bit hard from my perspective to read the document as is.
I assume that an improved sections layout and an English check should help.

-2- Reporting format is not clear for the proposed benchmarks.

-3- Traffic setup is clearer than the other draft, but maybe specifically mentioning the Ethernet frames format, or some wording on that, should help.

As a plus, I would add the following.

-4- From the test setup/test diagram it is difficult to understand how the test traffic is flowing from one element to the other.

-5- EVPN setup.
In one instance you say
“All four  routers except CE are running mpls,[space after comma]bgp
"

Some wording on how that should be set up, I think would help.

Regards,
Marius




On Aug 26, 2016, at 22:46, Sudhin Jacob <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

Hi All,

I have uploaded draft after incorporating the comments received by IETF 96. Kindly review it and let us know the feedback for adoption.

Regards,
Sudhin

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