Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11

Jim Reid via Datatracker <[email protected]>
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Reviewer: Jim Reid
Review result: Ready with Nits

The I-D is nearly ready and most of my earlier review comments have been
satisfactorily addressed by the authors.

One problem remains IMO. Section 6 still mentions ownership of an IP address.
This is wrong. It's also inappropriate language for an IETF standards document.
IP addresses are not property and therefore they cannot be owned.

I suggest changing

"This prevents a host from registering an address owned by another host."

to

"This prevents a host from registering an address already used by (or assigned
to) another host."
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