[dhcwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notific ation-11

Mallory Knodel via Datatracker <[email protected]>
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Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

<https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.

Document: draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-??
Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
Review Date: 2024-05-07
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-30
IESG Telechat date: 2024-05-16

Summary: This document is well written and clear.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments:

Two very brief spelling/grammar replacements:

s/re-start/restart
s/IA-Address/IA Address



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