[dhcwg] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-n otification-11

Jen Linkova <[email protected]> Wed, 8 May 2024 23:49:05 +1000
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.dhc,gmane.ietf.gen-art
Message-ID <CAFU7BATz7+C-kKhvV=nD6Zrt_hB=N6H56=5e9VT3THreU2k4FQ@mail.gmail.com>
Hi Mallory,

Thank you for pointing those typos out, they will be fixed in the next
version of the draft.

On Wed, May 8, 2024 at 3:31 AM Mallory Knodel via Datatracker
<[email protected]> wrote:
>
> Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>
> <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-??
> Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
> Review Date: 2024-05-07
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-30
> IESG Telechat date: 2024-05-16
>
> Summary: This document is well written and clear.
>
> Major issues: None.
>
> Minor issues: None.
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> Two very brief spelling/grammar replacements:
>
> s/re-start/restart
> s/IA-Address/IA Address
>
>
>


-- 
Cheers, Jen Linkova

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