[dhcwg] Mike Bishop's Yes on draft-ietf-dhc-rfc8415bis-10: (with COMMENT)

Mike Bishop has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dhc-rfc8415bis-10: Yes

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COMMENT:
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Excellent work, and glad to see this moving to IS. A few minor comments that
might be incorporated at the discretion of the authors and the responsible AD:

1.1: RFCs are immutable; "For a complete list of changes made to [RFC8415] see
Appendix A." => "For a complete list of differences from [RFC8415], see
Appendix A."

7.6: "This table of values used to describe the message transmission behavior
of clients and servers." => "This table of values is used to describe the
message transmission behavior of clients and servers." (Otherwise it invites
the question what it describes now!)



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