RE: FW: Communication of Alarm Info Workging Group lastcallcomplete

See in-line. 

Regards,

Dan



> -----Original Message-----
> From: [email protected] 
> [mailto:[email protected]]On Behalf Of Adrian Farrel
> Sent: 04 October, 2004 5:15 PM
> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); Wijnen, Bert (Bert); Disman 
> (E-mail) (E-mail)
> Cc: [email protected]
> Subject: Re: [Disman] FW: Communication of Alarm Info 
> Workging Group lastcallcomplete
> 
> 
> Thanks Dan,
> 
> [Lou Berger copied on this email as Ed. of this draft]
> [My DISMAN posting will probably bounce]-:
> 
> > I suggest the following changes:
> >
> >In Section 3.1.3
> >
> >OLD
> >
> >  In this document we define one new Error Code.  The Error Code uses
> >   the value TBA (by IANA) and is referred to as "Alarms".  
> The values
> >   used in the Error Values field are the same as the values used for
> >   IANAItuProbableCause in the Alarm MIB [ALARM-MIB].  Note 
> these values
> >   are managed by IANA, see http://www.iana.org.
> >
> >NEW:
> >
> >
> >  In this document we define one new Error Code.  The Error Code uses
> >   the value TBA (by IANA) and is referred to as " GMPLS 
> Alarms".  The values
> >   used in the Error Values field are the same as the values used for
> >   IANAItuProbableCause in the Alarm MIB [ALARM-MIB].  Note 
> these values
> >   are managed by IANA, see the IANA Considerations Section
> 
> I see two changes.
> 1. "Alarms" --> "GMPLS Alarms"
> I'm not sure why you propose this change. The alarms 
> indicated are NOT GMPLS alarms. They
> are Alarm MIB alarms indicated using GMPLS signaling. I 
> presume that the Alarm MIB does
> not refer to them as GMPLS Alarms.

Sorry - I was confused and believed that you are suggesting to extend the TC with a new value specific to GMPLS. This being not the case, I am tabling my sugestion. 


> 2. Reference changed from URL to IANA Considerations Section
> I have no strong feeling on this, but it seems to me that the 
> IANA Considerations Section
> is intended to list IANA actions for this draft, not to 
> provide reference information for
> the reader. I anything, I would tend to strike the whole 
> sentence ["Note these..."] as
> irrelevant.
> 

I believe that readability for the RFC user cannot harm. I would not fight to death about this however, and striking out the phrase is OK to me as well. 

> 
> >In the IANA Considerations Section:
> >
> >OLD:
> >
> >   Additionally, Section 3.1.3 defines a new Error Code.  
> The Error Code
> >   is "Alarms" and uses Error Values defined in the Alarm MIB [ALARM-
> >   MIB].  The suggested Error code value is 28.
> >
> >NEW:
> >
> >Additionally, Section 3.1.3 defines a new Error Code.  The Error Code
> >   is "GMPLS Alarms" and uses Error Values similar to  
> IANAItuProbableCause
> >   defined in the Alarm MIB [ALARM-MIB].  The Error code 
> value allocated by IANA
> >   is TBD, see http://www.iana.org.
> 
> I see points:
> 1. Change of "Alarms" to "GMPLS Alarms". As above.
> 2. Addition of "similar to ...."
>     This is good, but must use "which are the same as..."
> 3. Removal of suggested value.
>    We MUST suggest a value to IANA. This is a complex code space and
>    it is highly helpful to IANA that we suggest a value.
> 4. Reference to IANA URL. As before, this section is provided 
> for IANA's
>    benefit. So no URL is needed.
> 
> 
> >In Section 6.1
> >
> >OLD:
> >
> >[ALARM-MIB] Chisholm, S., Romascanu, D., "Alarm MIB",
> >            draft-ietf-disman-alarm-mib-18.txt, February 2004
> >
> >NEW:
> >
> >[ALARM-MIB] Chisholm, S., Romascanu, D., "Alarm MIB",
> >            RFC 3877, September 2004
> 
> Yup. We noticed that. Well done!
> 
> > What I suggest is to require from IANA a code value for 
> 'GMPLS Alarms' , and then use
> the text as suggested.
> 
> Thanks. Yes, we could do this, but have no need as the 
> established procedures for managing
> the RSVP code points are well understood by the community and 
> by IANA. Thus, the actual
> value will be supplied just prior to RFC Ed. If there is a 
> need for resolution of this
> particular value sooner than that, we will of course apply to 
> IANA under the provisions of
> draft-kompella-rsvp-change-02.txt
> 
> Cheers,
> Adrian
> 
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