Re: FW: [psg.com #327] AutoReply: More Editorial Issues

On Thu, Feb 12, 2004 at 01:31:23PM -0500, Sharon Chisholm wrote:

> With
> 
> "The administrative state for this entity. A value
>                 of 'notSupported' means that this entity is unable
>                 to report administrative state. This object can not
>                 be manually set to 'notSupported'. For
>                 entities that do not support administrative state,
>                 changing the value of this object to something other
>                 than 'notSupported' is not permitted.  A value of
>                 'inconsistentValue' will be returned in either case."

I still find the text confusing from a stylistic point of view.
What about this:

                 "The administrative state for this entity. A value 
		  of 'notSupported' means that this entity is unable
                  to report administrative state. 
		  
		  Setting this object to 'notSupported' will result
		  in an 'inconsistentValue' error. For entities that
		  do not support administrative state, all set
		  operations will result in an 'inconsistentValue' 
		  error."

/js

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