Review: draft-ietf-enum-enumservices-transition-04.txt

Gonzalo Camarillo <[email protected]> Fri, 16 Apr 2010 12:47:13 +0300
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.enum
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Hi,

please, find below my comments on the enumservices transition draft. As
soon as these comments are addressed, I will get the IESG as a whole to
review the draft.

Cheers,

Gonzalo


Review: draft-ietf-enum-enumservices-transition-04.txt

Abstracts should not contain references. Please, remove the reference to
RFC 3761 from it (it is OK to mention the RFC without the reference,
though).

Section 3 talks about the current policy being "Expert Review" and
"Specification Required". Per my comments on the enumservices-guide
document, this will have to be updated to point to a single IANA policy.