RE: I-D ACTION:draft-vaudreuil-mdnbis-00.txt

Greg,

Thanks for forwarding this.

> The following ID announcement is for a revision to the MDN specification in
> preparation for Draft Standard.  Please note:  Many seemingly unimplemented
> dispositions and all disposition modifiers have been removed.

The ABNF in section 3.2.6 seems to still list the disposition modifiers.

> If someone
> can name TWO interoperable implementations of any of the deleted
> dispositions or disposition modifiers, I will be happy to add them
> back into the document.
>
> Note that the requirements for draft standard are explicit that
> all features
> and options need to have at least two, interoperable implementations.  If
> they are still useful, the unimplemented dispositions deleted from this
> document may be standardized at a later date as an MDN extension.
>
> This document also adds an additional section for gateway advice.  The
> previous document was silent about what to do when gatewaying a MDN request
> into a foreign network.  Given that most email networks do not have a
> separate disposition-notification-to: recipient, that was a bit of an
> oversight.

Section 8.3 has a sentence which begins:

  In other most email systems,

which should be corrected.

> Please review and send comments.  It is my hope that we can quickly advance
> this to Draft Standard.

Section 3.2.2 and the 'Status of this memo' section both seem to be missing
some runoff commands to format the text correctly.

-d