Re: AD comments on draft-ietf-fax-gateway-protocol-06.txt anddraft-ietf-fax-gateway-options-04.txt

Yokoyama-san,

There seems to be a few things you do not answer for Ned's comment.
If not, please correct.

The first:
> The references in this document need to be separated into normative and
> informative groups, per recent RFC Editor requirements.

The second:
> The first paragraph of section 2.1 doesn't make sense and needs to be reworded.
> Unfortunately I cannot suggest alternative words since I'm not clear on what it
> actually should say. There are various other grammar, but none so serious as
> this.

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Hiroshi Tamura, Co-chair of IETF-FAX WG
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