Re: [Model] section 3.2.5
Jamal Hadi Salim <[email protected]> Thu, 28 Dec 2006 14:39:29 -0500
| Newsgroups | gmane.ietf.forces |
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| Organization | ZNYX Networks |
| Message-ID | <1167334769.5203.200.camel@jzny2> |
On Thu, 2006-28-12 at 13:57 -0500, Joel M. Halpern wrote: > Almost. > We need some word other than "element", since that is an XML term. > But yes, we need a little text that talks about the commonality of > structure of LFB attributes, LFB capabilities, and Structure components. > Shall i leave this in your able hands then? cheers, jamal > Yours, > Joel > > At 11:40 AM 12/28/2006, Jamal Hadi Salim wrote: > > >Sequentially going over the draft ... > > > >and as before, if theres some consensus i will put this in the tracker. > > > >Summary: this is also a readability issue: > > > >Section 3.2.5 references Elements in order to talk about their > >properties. > >Since "Elements" are such a central concept in LFB modelling, I think it > >would make a lot of sense to have a short subsection on LFB Elements > >(derived from the first paragraph) with proper reference for more > >details (currently described as "elsewhere") followed by a subsection on > >Element properties. > > > >cheers, > >jamal