Re: LC: draft-ietf-forces-protocol-10.txt>>comments

hi,

I am currently working on processing the open issues.

These are the expected answers to this set.

Please let me know if anyone disagrees with the approach.


On 12 jun 2007, at 20.47, Jia Fenggen wrote:


 > > ----- Original Message -----
 > > From: "Jia Fenggen" <[email protected]>

> Here are some comments on the draft-ietf-forces-protocol-10.txt.
> 1 Page43,table1,on association teardown message: Does Association  
> Teardown message need LFB selectTLV, I can't find any clue in  
> Section 7.5.3?

Table 1 corrected - needs ASTreason TLV


> 2 Page43,table1,on Heartbeat message:Section 7.10 says clearly that  
> heartbeat message doesn't need LFB SelectTLV,so the top level TLV  
> for this should be none?

Table 1 corrected to say none

> 3 Page43,table1,on packet redirect message:Section 7.9 says it
> doesn't need LFBSelectTLV,it only needs REDIRECT TLV,what is the  
> right one?

Table 1 corrected to say REDIRECT TLV

> 4 Page43,table1,on Config message:what is the meaning of ()+,does
> anywhere explain this?

i think it was meant as a multiplicity indicator.  i will remove the  
notation.

> 5 Page46,table2,on GET-RESPONSE TLV:   (RESULT-TLV)* (what is the
> meaning of ()* ?)

i think it was meant as a multiplicity indicator.  i will remove the  
notation.

> 6 Page46,table2 and page50 table 3:here is conflict on Redirect
> TLV, table 2 treats Redirect TLV as a kind of Oper TLV while table  
> 3 not,which
> is right?

It is not defined as an Oper TLV as far as i can tell.  i will remove  
if from table 2.


> 7 suggestion:we should add a tree structure for Packet redirect  
> message,also for association setup response message,Association  
> Teardown Message, config response message and query response  
> message to clarify the format
> of the specified messages.
>

As it is just a suggestion and not a bug, I decline to do that at  
this point.

If someone else wishes to draw it up, i will cut it into the document.

If I am required to do it, it will not get done before the draft  
deadline.


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