Re: WGLC: draft-ietf-hip-rfc6253-bis
Tom Henderson <[email protected]>
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On 07/03/2015 01:08 AM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:> Folks, > > I would like to start a WGLC on the following draft. This WGLC will end > on July 26th (i.e., right after the IETF meeting): > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-hip-rfc6253-bis/ > > Please, send your comments to this list. > > Thanks, > > Gonzalo > > _______________________________________________ > Hipsec mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/hipsec > Below are my (minor) comments on this draft. It is mostly unchanged from RFC6253, and I am fine with proceeding once the nits are fixed. - references to RFC4843 should be replaced by references to RFC7343 - IANA considerations section should be redone; since you are not introducing any new parameters, you should just ask IANA to replace references to RFC6253 (for the CERT parameter, Certificate Types, and Notify Message Types) with references to this specification. - in Section 3, replace IP Address:2001:2C:5a14:26de:a07c:385b:de35:60e3 with IP Address:2001:2c:5a14:26de:a07c:385b:de35:60e3 Tom