Re: WGLC: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal

On 12/02/16 22:59, Miika Komu wrote:
> Hi,
>
> On 01/29/2016 02:32 PM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> I would like to start a WGLC on the following draft. This WGLC will end
>> on February 12th:
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal/
>>
>> Please, send your comments to this list.
>
> in general, the draft should have a short intro to the NAT traversal
> procedure and re-introduce some terms even though it all is specified in
> RFC5770. This would make the draft a bit easier to read. I have also
> some other nits which I'll send a bit later.

Thanks for the review Miika! Also Petri commented along the same lines. 
We'll add some intro text to the draft to address this.


Cheers,
Ari