Re: Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-hip-rfc5206-bis-13: (with COMMENT)

Tom Henderson <[email protected]> Sun, 18 Sep 2016 22:22:49 -0700 (PDT)
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.hipsec,gmane.ietf.hip
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Alexey, thank you for the comments; please see below.

On 09/14/2016 12:15 AM, Alexey Melnikov wrote:
> Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-hip-rfc5206-bis-13: No Objection

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> COMMENT:
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> 
> I have a couple of minor nearly DISCUSSes that should be easy to fix:
> 
> This document doesn't have "Changes since RFC XXXX" section as required
> for any -bis document. Can you please convert Appendix A to be such a
> section?

Agreed (others have asked the same).

> 
> As this is a -bis document that obsoletes the original RFC 5206, its IANA
> Considerations section should be self contained. I think you should 
> mention that IANA has allocated type 193 for LOCATOR_SET and type 46 for
> LOCATOR_TYPE_UNSUPPORTED Notify Message Type, as specified in RFC 5206.

Agreed, we got some guidance earlier this summer on how to write this better; I will apply to the next version.

- Tom
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