Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28
Alissa Cooper <[email protected]> Wed, 9 May 2018 11:40:20 -0400
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--===============7527959386048149521== Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="Apple-Mail=_0EA69603-6D17-48DC-A7C8-4A59E210CCAD" --Apple-Mail=_0EA69603-6D17-48DC-A7C8-4A59E210CCAD Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Roni, thanks for your review. Miika, thanks for your response. I have = entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Apr 9, 2018, at 8:05 AM, Miika Komu <[email protected]> = wrote: >=20 > Hi Roni, >=20 > On 04/08/2018 10:32 AM, Roni Even wrote: >> Reviewer: Roni Even >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your >> document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> Document: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-?? >> Reviewer: Roni Even >> Review Date: 2018-04-08 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26 >> IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10 >> Summary: >> The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with = one nit. >> Major issues: >> Minor issues: >> Nits/editorial comments: >> In section 7 - "a new error type = SERVER_REFLEXIVE_CANDIDATE_ALLOCATION_FAILED >> in Section 5.9." It is in section 5.10 >=20 > good catch, I'll fix the reference in the next version. Thanks! >=20 > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art = <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art> --Apple-Mail=_0EA69603-6D17-48DC-A7C8-4A59E210CCAD Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=us-ascii <html><head><meta http-equiv=3D"Content-Type" content=3D"text/html = charset=3Dus-ascii"></head><body style=3D"word-wrap: break-word; = -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" = class=3D""><div class=3D"">Roni, thanks for your review. Miika, thanks = for your response. I have entered a No Objection ballot.</div><div = class=3D""><br class=3D""></div><div class=3D"">Alissa</div><br = class=3D""><div><blockquote type=3D"cite" class=3D""><div class=3D"">On = Apr 9, 2018, at 8:05 AM, Miika Komu <<a = href=3D"mailto:[email protected]" = class=3D"">[email protected]</a>> wrote:</div><br = class=3D"Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=3D""><span = style=3D"font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; = font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; = orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: = none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; = -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline = !important;" class=3D"">Hi Roni,</span><br style=3D"font-family: = Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: = normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; = text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: = normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: = 0px;" class=3D""><br style=3D"font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; = font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; = letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: = 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; = word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><span = style=3D"font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; = font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; = orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: = none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; = -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline = !important;" class=3D"">On 04/08/2018 10:32 AM, Roni Even = wrote:</span><br style=3D"font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; = font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; = letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: = 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; = word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><blockquote= type=3D"cite" style=3D"font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; = font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; = letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: = 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; = word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D"">Reviewer: = Roni Even<br class=3D"">Review result: Ready with Nits<br class=3D"">I = am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area<br = class=3D"">Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being = processed<br class=3D"">by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for = direction from your<br class=3D"">document shepherd or AD before posting = a new version of the draft.<br class=3D"">For more information, please = see the FAQ at<br class=3D""><<a = href=3D"https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq" = class=3D"">https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq</a>>.<br = class=3D"">Document: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-??<br = class=3D"">Reviewer: Roni Even<br class=3D"">Review Date: 2018-04-08<br = class=3D"">IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26<br class=3D"">IESG Telechat = date: 2018-05-10<br class=3D"">Summary:<br class=3D"">The document is = ready for publication as a standard track RFC with one nit.<br = class=3D"">Major issues:<br class=3D"">Minor issues:<br = class=3D"">Nits/editorial comments:<br class=3D"">In section 7 - "a new = error type SERVER_REFLEXIVE_CANDIDATE_ALLOCATION_FAILED<br = class=3D"">in Section 5.9." It is in section 5.10<br = class=3D""></blockquote><br style=3D"font-family: Helvetica; font-size: = 12px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: = normal; letter-spacing: normal; orphans: auto; text-align: start; = text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: = auto; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;" class=3D""><span= style=3D"font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 12px; font-style: normal; = font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; = orphans: auto; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: = none; white-space: normal; widows: auto; word-spacing: 0px; = -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; float: none; display: inline = !important;" class=3D"">good catch, I'll fix the reference in the next = version. 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