RE: WGLC for: draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-cu-mib-06.txt
"Moti Morgenstern" <[email protected]> Tue, 17 Oct 2006 19:06:43 +0200
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Hi,
1) A minor issue regarding to 'on top of'
- In the ifCapStackTable's description
= It first appears as: ...possible 'on top of'...
= then: ...run 'on top of'... (which is same as the first)
= but then: ...run on top of... (should be: run 'on top of')
2) Again, regarding to 'on top of' but this time more important
- In the ifCapStackEntry's description
= It appears as: ...runs on 'top' of
which I assume should be changed to: MAY run 'on top of'...
3) In the ifCapStackEntry's description, shouldn't the sentence in
parentheses be "(interface index for higher- and lower-layer
respectively)?
4) Explaining the value 'active' for ifCapStatusStack
= The MINIMUM change required is using the term 'underneath' isntead
of 'below'.
= It is recommended, however, to perform a deeper change, because
the
ifCapStackTable is actually from the p.o.v. of the HIGHER layer.
The
proposed text would be "indicates that the sub-layer interface,
identified by the ifStackHigherLayer MAY be connected to run
'on top of' the sub-layer interface, identified by the
ifStackLowerLayer index."
Regards,
Moti M