RE: WGLC for: draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-cu-mib-06.txt

"Moti Morgenstern" <[email protected]> Tue, 17 Oct 2006 19:06:43 +0200
Newsgroups gmane.ietf.hubmib
Message-ID <[email protected]>
Hi,

1) A minor issue regarding to 'on top of'
    - In the ifCapStackTable's description 
      = It first appears as: ...possible 'on top of'...
      = then: ...run 'on top of'... (which is same as the first)
      = but then: ...run on top of... (should be: run 'on top of')
2) Again, regarding to 'on top of' but this time more important
    - In the ifCapStackEntry's description 
      = It appears as: ...runs on 'top' of
         which I assume should be changed to: MAY run 'on top of'...
3) In the ifCapStackEntry's description, shouldn't the sentence in 
    parentheses be "(interface index for higher- and lower-layer
respectively)?
4) Explaining the value 'active' for ifCapStatusStack 
    = The MINIMUM change required is using the term 'underneath' isntead
       of 'below'.
    =  It is recommended, however, to perform a deeper change, because
the
        ifCapStackTable is actually from the p.o.v. of the HIGHER layer.
The
        proposed text would be "indicates that the sub-layer interface,
        identified by the ifStackHigherLayer MAY be connected to run
        'on top of' the sub-layer interface, identified by the
ifStackLowerLayer index."
 
Regards,
Moti M