RE: My review of: draft-ietf-hubmib-efm-cu-mib-06.txt
"Wijnen, Bert \(Bert\)" <[email protected]> Wed, 21 Feb 2007 15:51:14 +0100
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Looks good now. One thing (I should have seen yesterday too) is that you need to move a few informative refrences to=20 the normative references and vice versa - I think RFC3410 is informative (it is also an informational RFC). - RFC2863 and RFC2864 are normative, because we IMPORT from those. - Since we use them in REFERENCE clauses or we use profiles from (as listed in DESCRIPTION clauses), I think that also ANFP< but certainly 991.2 and 992.1 are normative, no? - Since we state: 3.4. Relation to Ethernet-Like and MAU MIB modules The implementation of EtherLike-MIB [RFC3635] and MAU-MIB [I-D.ietf-hubmib-rfc3636bis] is REQUIRED for the EFMCu interfaces. We probably also better make RFC3635 a normative ref. With that I think we would be ready. Further, I would like to react to a few of Ed's rebuttals: > > - But I do want you to fix SMICng reported error: > >=20 > > E: f(rfc2864.mi2), (168,26) Item "ifStackGroup2" should be IMPORTed > > =20 > > since you do list that as a mandatory group. >=20 > [EB] ifStackGroup2 is already imported, I've fixed that in=20 > the version I sent before. >=20 My appology, the error is in RFC2864, not in the EFM-CU-MIB. > > > >- Did we resolve the use of Rowstatus for the ifCapStackTable > > > > and ifInvCapStackTable? In any event, pls re-check the > > > > feedback we've got on that. I do not think that what we > > > > currently have in the MIB module is acceptable. > > >=20 > > > [EB] Replaced with TruthValue. > >=20 > > This is much better. > > I wonder if it would now be better to rename the object from=20 > > ifCapStackStatus to ifCapStackCapability to better represent its=20 > > purpose. Same for possibly renaming ifInvCapStackStatus into=20 > > ifInvCapStackCapability. > >=20 > > I am not hung up on it though. >=20 > [EB] ifCapStack already stands for "Interface Capability=20 > Stack" - appending "Capability" would make it "Interface=20 > Capability Stack Capability". How about: ifCapStackAbility ? > Or we can leave it ifCapStackStatus, to emphasize its=20 > similarity with IfStackTable >=20 Your argument for consistency with ifCapStackStatus makes sense. And as I said, I am not hung up on it. So I am OK now. > [EB] I've found only one table without the persistency definition > (efmCuPme10PStatusTable) and corrected it - now all tables=20 > contain the persistency behavior definition in the=20 > DESCRIPTION clause for the table. > Basically only the Status tables are non-persistent. > Would that be satisfactory? >=20 Yep. I think we made good progress. Pls correct the references (as stated at the top of this email) and then you can submit to internet-drafts as far as I am concenrned. Next step is then (another) W Last Call to givbe anyone a chance to look at the latest changes. Bert