Re: PIDF - some things left out of draft
"Hiroyasu Sugano" <[email protected]>
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Wayne, Thanks very much for your comments. Most of the issues 2 and 3 are reflected in the coming draft. I have one comment. > Section 4.1.3, the first sentence of the first paragraph should be changed > to: "The <status> element contains 0 or 1 OPTIONAL <basic> elements, > followed by 0 or more OPTIONAL extension elements from other namespaces." This statement seems to allow the <status> element with no values, which is not allowed in the present draft. If we go with this restriction, the sentence above would be like: The <status> element contains 0 or 1 OPTIONAL <basic> elements, followed by 0 or more OPTIONAL extension elements from other namespaces, under the restriction that at least one child element appears in the <status> element. If you have better wording, please post it. Regards, -- Hiroyasu Sugano [reminder: [email protected] for non-technical discussions, please]