FW: COMMENT: draft-ietf-ipcdn-subscriber-mib-15

I am forwarding IESG comments as I receive them.

Answers are fine. Pls do not yet submit a changed document untill
we get ALL the IESG comments. Should be around Tuesday next week.

Bert
-----Original Message-----
From: Russ Housley [mailto:[email protected]]
Sent: Wednesday, September 22, 2004 21:47
To: [email protected]
Subject: COMMENT: draft-ietf-ipcdn-subscriber-mib-15


Management Information Base for Data Over Cable Service Interface 
Specification (DOCSIS)
  Cable Modem Termination Systems for Subscriber Management (Proposed Standard)

COMMENT

   The 2nd paragraph of Section 9 says:
   :
   : Effective network filtering of TCP traffic requires that implementors
   : MUST follow the recommendations in section 3.2.6.
   :
   I suggest replacement text:

     For network filtering of TCP traffic to be effective, implementors
     MUST follow the recommendations in section 3.2.6.