RFMIBv2 ID-nits: references
"Jean-Francois Mule" <[email protected]>
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Check ID nits and other comments made by mib doctors in other drafts.
http://www.ietf.org/ID-nits.html
There are normative references that are not even mentioned once and not used as IMPORTs in the document:
[1] Woundy, R., "Baseline Privacy Interface Management
Information Base for DOCSIS Compliant Cable Modems
and Cable Modem Termination Systems", RFC3083, March 2001.
[9] "Adapted MIB-definitions and a clarification for MPEG-related
issues for EuroDOCSIS cable modem systems v1.01", tComLabs,
May 2000., available at http://www.tcomlabs.com.
Suggestions:
- call this reference in the text or just remove it;
- I cannot find the named reference under http://www.tcomlabs.com ; if you keep it, then we need a better link, especially if it remains normative.
Also, should [6] be made informative instead of normative?
(a) it's a book
(b) the DOCSIS specs are referenced normatively and that's where a normative reference on QPSK should be.
[6] Proakis, John G., "Digital Communications, 3rd Edition",
McGraw-Hill, New York, New York, 1995, ISBN 0-07-051726-6
Thanks,
Jean-François
PS: also, CableLabs is working on a stable HTTP URL for our specifications so the http://www.cablemodem.com URL will most likely have to be updated. More on the actual URL soon.