Re: [IPFIX] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-ipfix-flow-selection-tech-13.txt

Dear authors,

Looking at the diff, I have the following feedback.

flowSelectorAlgorithm is a new IE, to be registered by IANA
I see this in section 7.1:

    New assignments for the registry will be administered by
    IANA and are subject to Expert Review [RFC5226  <http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5226>].

This new registry should be in the IANA considerations section.
For an example of the IANA considerations, see 
http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6313#section-11.3
So the section 7.1 to 7.11 should be in the IANA considerations section.

Also, in that registry, I see:

    +----+------------------------+--------------------------+
    |TBDx| Flow-state Dependent   | No agreed Parameters     |
    |    | Intermediate Flow      |                          |
    |    | Selection Process      |                          |
    +----+------------------------+--------------------------+

This should be

    +----+------------------------+--------------------------+
    |  9 | Flow-state Dependent   | No agreed Parameters     |
    |    | Intermediate Flow      |                          |
    |    | Selection Process      |                          |
    +----+------------------------+--------------------------+

On this last point, I realized that I mislead you. Mea culpa.

I see  in section 7.x

    Status: Proposed

The status should be "current"

Really, http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6313#section-11.3 is a good example.

And finally, there are new fields in 
http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipfix/ipfix.xml since you posted you 
version. For example "revision". Instruct IANA that they need to put the 
value 0.

These comments can be taken into account part of the WGLC to come. Up to 
chairs to decide.

Regards, Benoit
> A new version (-13) has been submitted for draft-ietf-ipfix-flow-selection-tech:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ipfix-flow-selection-tech-13.txt
>
> Sub state has been changed to AD Followup from Revised ID Needed
>
>
> The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipfix-flow-selection-tech/
>
> Diff from previous version:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipfix-flow-selection-tech-13
>
> IETF Secretariat.
>
>
>

_______________________________________________
IPFIX mailing list
[email protected]
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ipfix