Blocking dependencies for draft-ietf-ipo-impairments-04.txt
"Daniel O. Awduche" <[email protected]> Mon, 28 Apr 2003 13:10:34 -0400
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The IPO Impairments document (draft-ietf-ipo-impairments-04.txt)
contains
dependencies which is blocking its progression through the RFC editor
queue.
The dependencies relate to the following obsolete normative references:
- draft-chiu-strand-unique-olcp-01.txt
- draft-chaudhuri-ip-olxc-control
To remove the dependencies, I suggested to delete the above references,
and proposed the following replacement text concerning pertinent
citations.
These changes do not affect the substance of the document. The editors
(and other interested parties) should please review the proposed
amendments and indicate whether they are acceptable (or suggest
alternative text):
--
Section 4.7: original text
- 1a) This is discussed in [Chaudhuri00], where it is concluded that
advertising detailed wavelength availabilities on each link
is not likely to scale.
Suggested replacement text:
- 1b) Advertising detailed wavelength availabilities on each link is not
likely to scale.
---
Section 6.7: original text
- 2a) [Chaudhuri00] introduced the term "Shared Risk Link Group" (SRLG)
to
describe the relationship between two non-diverse links.
Suggested replacement text:
- 2b) The term "Shared Risk Link Group" (SRLG) is used to
describe the relationship between two non-diverse links.
---
On normative references:
- Remove: draft-chaudhuri-ip-olxc-control
- Remove: draft-chiu-strand-unique-olcp-01.txt
Reference Strand01 now becomes:
[Strand01] J. Strand, A. Chiu, and R. Tkach, "Issues for Routing in
the Optical Layer", IEEE Communications Magazine, Feb. 2001,
vol. 39
No. 2, pp. 81-88;
Cheers,
/Dan
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<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">The IPO Impairments document (</FONT><FONT =
FACE=3D"Arial">draft-ietf-ipo-impairments-04.txt</FONT><FONT =
FACE=3D"Arial">) contains </FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">dependencies which is blocking its progression =
through the RFC editor queue. </FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">The dependencies relate to the following =
obsolete normative references:</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">-</FONT> <FONT =
FACE=3D"Arial">draft-chiu-strand-unique-olcp-01.txt</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">-</FONT> <FONT =
FACE=3D"Arial">draft-chaudhuri-ip-olxc-control</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">To remove the dependencies, I suggested to =
delete the above references,</FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">and proposed the following replacement text =
concerning pertinent citations. </FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">These changes do not affect the substance of =
the document. The editors </FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">(and other interested parties) should please =
review the proposed </FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">amendments and indicate whether they are =
acceptable (or suggest </FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">alternative text): </FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">--</FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">Section 4.7: original text</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">- 1a) This is discussed in [Chaudhuri00], where =
it is concluded that </FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">advertising detailed wavelength availabilities =
on each link </FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">is not likely to scale.</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">Suggested replacement text:</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">- 1b) Advertising detailed wavelength =
availabilities on each link is not likely to scale. </FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">---</FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">Section 6.7: original text</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">- 2a) [Chaudhuri00] introduced the term =
"Shared Risk Link Group" (SRLG) to </FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial"> =
describe the relationship between two non-diverse links. </FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">Suggested replacement text:</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">- 2b) The term "Shared Risk Link =
Group" (SRLG) is used to </FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial"> =
describe the relationship between two non-diverse links. </FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">---</FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">On normative references:</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">- Remove: draft-chaudhuri-ip-olxc-control =
</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">- Remove: =
draft-chiu-strand-unique-olcp-01.txt</FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">Reference Strand01 now becomes:</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">[Strand01] J. Strand, A. Chiu, and R. Tkach, =
"Issues for Routing in</FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial"> the =
Optical Layer", IEEE Communications Magazine, Feb. 2001, vol. 39 =
</FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial"> No. =
2, pp. 81-88;</FONT>
</P>
<P><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">Cheers,</FONT>
<BR><FONT FACE=3D"Arial">/Dan</FONT>
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