Re: Initial draft of IPP/2.0 update posted
Alan Sukert via ipp <[email protected]>
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Mike, I am not officially a member of IPP but I thought I would do a quick review of the draft for you. Here are some comments: 1. The IEEE Standards Association link on line 41 does not work. 2. The link associated with the PWG5100.3 entry in Section 10.1 is not to PWG5100.3 standard; it is to IPP Production Printing Extensions v2.0. 3. The link asociated with the PWG5100.11 entry in Section 10.1 is not to the PWG5100.11 Standard; it is to IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0. 4. The "http://www.pwg.org/ipp/" link in Section 12 on page 29 isn't a hyperlink. 5. Section 9.1 references PWG5100.12, but it is not included in the list of references in Section 10. Alan ________________________________ From: ipp <[email protected]> on behalf of Michael Sweet via ipp <[email protected]> Sent: Thursday, February 11, 2021 8:41 AM To: PWG IPP Workgroup <[email protected]> Subject: [IPP] Initial draft of IPP/2.0 update posted All, I have posted an initial draft of the update to PWG 5100.12-2015 (IPP Versions 2.0, 2.1, and 2.2) to: https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippbase23-20210211.docx https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippbase23-20210211.pdf https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippbase23-20210211-rev.pdf ________________________ Michael Sweet _______________________________________________ ipp mailing list [email protected] https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/ipp