[art] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-rena me-esn-02

Rich Salz via Datatracker <[email protected]> Mon, 06 Jan 2025 10:23:29 -0800

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Reviewer: Rich Salz
Review result: Ready

I'm the ARTART reviewer for this document. The kinds of things this directorate
looks for are described at https://wiki.ietf.org/group/art/TypicalARTAreaIssues

I found this wording initially confusing: "the sender in accordance with AH
([RFC4302] Section 3.3.2) and ESP ([RFC4303] Section 3.3.3) specifications" I
suggest "the sender in accordance with the specifications for AH ([RFC4302]
Section 3.3.2) and ESP ([RFC4303] Section 3.3.3) ..." That aside, I found the
Introduction incredibly useful background information, thank you.

I found nothing of concern otherwise.


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