Re: [KAMADA Ken'ichi] Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art LC Review: draft-ietf-kink-kink-11.txt

Michael Thomas <[email protected]> Wed, 14 Dec 2005 18:06:14 -0800
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Sam Hartman wrote:
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> At Tue, 13 Dec 2005 19:49:41 -0500,
> "Joel M. Halpern" <[email protected]> wrote:
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>>But the document never actually states that encapsulation rule.
>>I could tell from the examples that was what you intended.
>>But the words need to actually say it.
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>>The current text of KINK_ENCRYPT just states that it carries some=20
>>sub-values.  It does not state what the sub-values are, nor that if use=
d it=20
>>should carry all content except the KINK_AP_REQ.
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> I see your point.
> I added a paragraph about the content of KINK_ENCRYPT in section 6.
> Some notes:
>  1) As I also think message construction is suitable for section 6
>     (as with Sakane-san), I added the paragraph there.
>  2) DELETE and STATUS messages may also contain a KINK_ENCRYPT
>     payload.  I'd like to add the description in the generic part of
>     section 6 rather than in the subsection of each command/reply.
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> BTW, when clarifying KINK_ENCRYPT, I noticed that section 6.3
> indicates that KINK_ENCRYPT in a CREATE message is optional.
> I suspect this is a mistake.
> Mike, could you confirm this is not intentional?
> If not, I'd like to change that as well.

It was intentional that KINK_ENCRYPT was optional -- for everything.
I don't really feel very strongly about it at this point other than
general nervousness about making big changes in the document at
this point with a good possibility that the document will be
inconsistent.

		Mike