Fwd: Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-krb-wg-kdc-model-14: (with COMMENT)

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This comment from Barry warrants discussion in the WG I think...

	Cheers Leif


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Subject: Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-krb-wg-kdc-model-14:
(with COMMENT)
Resent-Date: Mon, 27 Aug 2012 21:53:07 +0200
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Date: Mon, 27 Aug 2012 12:52:50 -0700
From: Barry Leiba <[email protected]>
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Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-krb-wg-kdc-model-14: No Objection

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These are non-blocking, but please consider them seriously, and feel free
to
chat with me about them:

I find Section 2 to be rather odd.  I don't like the way you say that the
terms are used as defined in 2119, and then go on to say, "Oh, but
they're really not, and here's what we mean."  I would *greatly* prefer
that you eliminate the 2119 boilerplate and reference, and simply define
the terms here, as you mean them.

- -- Section 4.1 --

   The Principal MUST be implemented in full and MUST NOT be OPTIONAL in
   an implementation

I think the combination of not-really-2119 terms here is confusing: "MUST
NOT be OPTIONAL".  Maybe the right fix here is just to use lower-case
"optional".  Or, better, maybe just this: "The Principal MUST be
implemented in full, as a required part of every implementation."

- -- Section 4.3 --

Similarly, make "MUST NOT REQUIRE" into "MUST NOT require", probably.




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