Re: [Protocol] clarification on StartTLS resonse (WAS: authmeth-15notes)

I like that better. I was tempted to clarify the "point" by changing to
something like "Upon receipt of a successful StartTLS Response, the
client may commence..." but that doesn't flow well into the pointer to
AuthMeth (because AuthMeth has instructions for both peers).

>>> "Kurt D. Zeilenga" <[email protected]> 10/18/05 5:16:46 pm >>>
At 03:33 PM 10/18/2005, Jim Sermersheim wrote:
>My proposed change to [Protocol] Section 4.14.2 is this:
><old>
>If the server is willing and able to negotiate TLS, it returns with
the resultCode set to success. Refer to Section 4 of [AuthMeth] for
details.
><new>
>If the server is willing and able to negotiate TLS, it returns with
the resultCode set to success. At this point the protocol peers may
commence with TLS negotiation. Refer to Section 4 of [AuthMeth] for
details. 

I suggest replacing the last two sentences with:
        At this point, the protocol peers commence TLS
        negotiation as discussed in Section 3 of [AuthMeth].

It might also be appropriate to describe "this point" more
precisely, but my attempts in doing that were awkward at
best.  I do think "this point" is reasonable clear.

Kurt