[manet] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-c lassification-12

Reviewer: Tina Tsou
Review result: Has Issues

1. Introduction: The purpose and scope are well-defined. Consider providing
additional real-world examples to illustrate the need for traffic
classification.

2. Traffic Classification Types: The classification types are comprehensive.
Ensure that the definitions are aligned with industry standards.

3. Traffic Classification Attributes: The attributes are detailed and
well-explained. Verify that the attribute values cover all potential use cases.

4. Traffic Classification Procedures: The procedures are clear and logically
structured. Consider adding flowcharts or diagrams to visualize the message
exchanges.

5. IANA Considerations: The section is thorough. Double-check the parameter
values and ensure all necessary registrations are included.

6. Security Considerations: The security section addresses key risks. Consider
expanding on specific attack scenarios and their mitigations.

By addressing these feedback areas, the document can be improved for clarity,
completeness, and technical accuracy.


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