[manet] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-cr edit-extension-18

Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/rtg/RtgDir

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-18
Reviewer: Jia He
Review Date: August 8, 2024
IETF LC End Date: date-if-known
Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary:
This document is basically ready for publication. It is one of the four drafts which define the DLEP extensions to support credit window based flow control scheme. Most of the content in the draft is the same as in the draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension. The comments to the draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension about the out-of-date references still apply.

No major issues found.

No minor issues found.

Nits:

1、  Replace the out-of-date references to "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-12", and "draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification-09" with the latest versions.


B.R.
Jia

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