[manet] Re: Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ie tf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08: (with COMMENT)
Donald Eastlake <[email protected]>
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Hi Mahesh, On Sat, Feb 1, 2025 at 7:56 PM Mahesh Jethanandani via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote: > Mahesh Jethanandani has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-manet-dlep-ether-credit-extension-08: No Objection > > ... > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- > NIT > ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Some of the text in this cluster of documents is repeated across the documents. > The nits therefore follow some of that duplicated text. > > All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to > address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by > automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there > will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you > did with these suggestions. > > Section 1, paragraph 1 > > The Dynamic Link Exchange Protocol (DLEP) is defined in [RFC8175]. > > This protocol provides the exchange of link related control > > information between DLEP peers. DLEP peers consist of a modem and a > > router. DLEP defines a base set of mechanisms as well as support for > > possible extensions. This document defines one such extension. > > s/This protocol/The protocol/ Ok. > Document references draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control-16, but -17 is > the latest available revision. Ok. > Section 1, paragraph 2 > > ws may be shared or dedicated on a per flow basis. See [I-D.ietf-manet-dlep-d > > ^^^^^^^^ > In this context, "per-flow" forms an adjective and is spelled with a hyphen. Ok. Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA [email protected] _______________________________________________ manet mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]