[manet] Re: Deb Cooley's No Objection on draft-ietf-manet- dlep-da-credit-extension-20: (with COMMENT)

Hi Deb,

On Sun, Feb 2, 2025 at 3:26 PM Deb Cooley via Datatracker
<[email protected]> wrote:
> Deb Cooley has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-da-credit-extension-20: No Objection
>
> ...
>
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> COMMENT:
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>
> Section 4:  If changes are made to update the Security Consideration sections
> of draft-ietf-manet-dlep-traffic-classification and
> draft-ietf-manet-dlep-credit-flow-control, I recommend this draft reference one
> or both of those drafts.

Ok.

> Section 4:  Wildcards are literally mentioned only in the Introduction and
> here. I certainly don't mind the recommendation in this section, but should
> this be a standalone paragraph?  And should it appear in some/all of the other
> drafts in the group?

Gunter's wording suggestions include splitting that paragraph. We can
check other drafts.

> Section 4, last sentence:  Does this apply to the wildcard topic?  Or something
> else, maybe the second sentence?  I think this section could use some
> restructuring.

Also addressed by Gunter's wording suggestions.

Thanks,
Donald
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