[manet] Re: Paul Wouters' Discuss on draft-ietf-manet-dlep -traffic-classification-15: (with DISCUSS)

Hi Paul

Thanks for noticing the moved dividers- fixed
I have also changed ":" to "~" .  Where you pointed out and elsewhere.

Also, I'm aligning the security text to match the recent changes in the Flow control draft.
I have just posted version 16 which addresses these points.

Thanks
Don


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DISCUSS:
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Thanks for resolving the security DISCUSS raised by Deb and my validation error
concern. There are just a few small items left that need fixing.

The figure in Section 2.1 makes it appear that a Traffic Classification
Sub-Data Item is 32 bits in size, but Section 2.1.1 shows it is variable length
of at least 64 bits (again using to to me unknown convention of ":" instead of
"~")

Also in the last two updates since my previous ballot, a new error appeared in
table 2.2 and 2.3. The text "Must be one (1)" was replaced with "Sub-Data Item
Type (1)" and the longer text moved the Length field marker to an incorrect
place.

Once these errors are fixed, I will resolve my DISCUSS.

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