Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-mboned-deprecate-interdomain-asm-06: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-mboned-deprecate-interdomain-asm-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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A couple of suggestions to help the document be more timeless:

= Section 2.2.1 =

s/To this day/At the time of this writing/

= Section 4.4 =

OLD
While the WG discussions had consensus that best practices should be
   developed to explain when to use SSM in applications, e.g, when ASM
   without (S,G) state in the network is better, or when dedicated
   service-discovery mechanisms should be used, it was agreed that
   documenting such practices are outside the scope of this document.

NEW
This document describes best practices to explain when to use SSM in
applications, e.g, when ASM without (S,G) state in the network is better, or
when dedicated service-discovery mechanisms should be used, but specifying
these practices is outside the scope of this document.


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