reviews on draft-ietf-dmm-deployment-models ?

Folks,

Asking the obvious? Anyone reviewed this draft? If yes, could you share your views/comments/concerns on it?


My very quick read on it initiated few comments..

o Tables use abbreviations that are never explained, like MC (mobility
  controller) and RC (routing controller), etc.
o The above mentioned controllers are never really detailed what they
  do. I would expect similar section as there are for CPNs and CPAs.
o I was expecting a short summary or alike at the end of the
  document.

- Jouni