Re: New OnDemand version - 09

Lorenzo Colitti <[email protected]>
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On Mon, Dec 12, 2016 at 10:23 PM, Moses, Danny <[email protected]>
wrote:

> I have uploaded a new version of the draft: draft-ietf-dmm-ondemand-mobility-09,
> addressing Lorenzo’s comments (and fixing some typos).
>

The new text is an improvement, thanks. Can something be done about this
text as well?

   For example, a host may not always have a
   Session-lasting IP address available.  When an application requests
   one, the IP stack shall make an attempt to configure one by issuing a
   request to the network"

The simplest thing would probably be to refer to the text in section 3.4
which talks about how to form a new address by obtaining a prefix from the
network. Maybe that text could be broken out to its own "When an
appropriate IP address is not available" section?

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